jc-wiseman

I'd like some feedback to hear if anyone would be up for it. My Protoge story has recently sparked me to write a couple chapters of it. If the people would really want me to, I'd like to post it on my gallery. For more info on the story my Protoge file on my gallery is open.

I have a shirt design in the original design shirt challenge and would appreciate any votes. Spread the word mine is called "To Be Human"...

Recently my little brother and I are developing a story influenced by LXG and Sherlock (BBC). Interestingly we can't agree on a title, (even though he's not coming up with any cool ideas). Suggestions are welcome.

In light of the release of the Legend of Korra, I've decided to end my fanfiction here. To those who wish for it's continuation, I apologize for I feel it is for the best in order to honor the canon of a fine story already in place. Thank you for the watches and I hope you enjoyed reading as much as I did writing. I will be devoting a little more energy in my own original stories, but because I like you I'll sum up what I intended for this story and I'll connect the dots up to the Legend of Korra as a general story....
As you might of guessed, Azula is the Black Phoenix collecting everyone that wants revenge on the Avatar and putting together the Phoenix Guild as a terrorist orgnaization devoted to taking over the world as an echo to Fire Lord Ozai's original plans. This Phoenix Guild includes benders of all nations including the fire nation's Rough Rhinos, the water tribes' Hamma the bloodbender, and the earth kingdom's Long Feng. These along with other Ozai followers aided Azula in her escape. They Refer to her as The Black Phoenix and Ozai as the Dragon Emperor as they intend to engulf the world into his empire.
Aang's efforts bring him all over the world to find descendants from the Air Nomads, but unfortunately only a handful have the spark necessary and the majority return back to their homes. I intended to make Teo as one of the Air Nomad descendants and that his mother was the one with the air gene. Teo not having airbending ability creates gadgets to simulate the ability and even builds leg braces for him to walk, run, and move with the agility of an airbender. Teo, Aang, Jo Yan, and Guru Pathik come together to recreate the destroyed records of the Air Nomads, but Aang is unable to teach them the actual art of Airbending. Finally endowing them with Airbending through energybending.
Sokka becomes and official member of the Order of the White Lotus as does Suki go through intiation becoming the first woman member in history.
Toph returns to Ba Sing Se to resureect the Dai Li organization, but bring them out of the shadows transforming them into a police system.
I also intended for Teo and Toph to have a brief relationship.
The Order of the White Lotus primarily brings the Phoenix Guild to justice while Aang and Zuko hire Kuzon as the primary architect for a new city establishment. Kuzon although being an investigator is also renaissance man of sorts and is the perect man for the job. Sadly however, he passes away before the completion of the plans and thus falls to Aang and his three air disciples to complete it with the through support of Fire Lord Zuko.
Jin Long serves time for twenty years in prison and retires soon after his release.
The invention that Teo was working on in this episode was an idea I had for a sort of smoking pipe that served the same purpose as an inhaler going off the idea that Air Nomads had a lot of brilliant ideas in medicine, the arts, etc.
Any questions about anything I left out are encouraged...

I am aching to submit original art, but for some reason a fear is holding me back.
I'm afraid it might get taken (at least the idea of it) and i won't get any credit. I'm being selfish i know and probably giving my ideas far too much credit, but....

man...